A cute and funny litte Yuri Doujin
This is my first review here, and I picked "Of Girls, Love, and Money", simply because it was the first Yuri Doujin I read coming from irodori, and also the first made by Hiroyuki (I think).
It's easy to read (good flow, probably also due to the panel layout), and the art is pretty good! Plus the dynamic between the characters works out pretty well. I don't like the money part too much I must say, but... well, let's just roll with it.
Some positive and negative criticizm page for page:
Page 11: Nice hug, I like it!
Page 15: I'm not sure, but I feel this part doesn't quite need the dead eyes (they work well for me in other panels though).
Page 24: When she says that in the last panel on that page, things suddenly take a turn into a more emotionally serious direction. *Very* well played, I'd say this scene has the intended impact! I liked that little twist the most!
Page 25: This part is pretty good overall, but something doesn't work for me with that eye closeup. Not sure what it is though.
Page 26: Yeeess! Beautiful, that full size panel. Expression and everything, love it!
So there you have it, I liked it overall. If it's Yuri, I'd definitely get more of your Doujins. :)
Thank you for drawing "Of Girls, Love and Money"!